Saturday, October 23, 2010

Pervseus Saviour, Chapter 1

Kira-kira seminggu yang lalu gua nemu cerita yang gua bikin pertama kali pas jaman-jaman SMP, setelah gua baca-baca lagi...bahasanya terlalu kaku, dan inilah kerjaan gua selama gua sedang tidak ada kerjaan akhir-akhir ini selain merakit dan menjahili RMC-RMC gua, aslinya cerita ini dulu dibikin pas jaman kelas 3 SMP, tapi karena terlalu pendek ceritanya, akhirnya gua remake ceritanya tapi dengan konsep cerita yang masih sama. dan ya, cerita ini masi jauh dari selesai T_T, dan hari ini baru selesai ngedit yang chapter 3

 

EDIT: ada beberapa yang gua benerin kalimatnya =)


CHAPTER 1

A Girl Named Miranda

 

“Rise and shine my little boy, tonight, you’re going to your High School graduation party, right !” says mom. Jason with his pajamas on and messy hair opens his eyes, he rises from his bed and yawning, his mom is right beside him with a bright smile, and Jason says “Alright mom ! geez, it’s still 9 AM, and the party starts like 10 more hours !” his mom is so excited that his son is finally become a man, but deep inside her, she also feels sad because in the next 3 months Jason is going to college leaving his mom and his dad alone. Jason is their oldest son, his younger brother Mario were still in junior high and they love them so much. Jason takes his pajamas off, going inside the bathtub and having a relaxing time while listen to his MP3 player in the bathroom. And after a few moment, his mom shouting at Jason from the kitchen

 

“Breakfeast ready, Jason ! come on out now ! you’re too long in the bathroom ! says mom.

 

Jason did not respond for his mom’s shout, Jason fell asleep while he’s having a bath in the bathtub. He had a strange dreams while he’s asleep. He saw A white blonde girl trying to reach his hand, he lays on the ground looks exhausted and all weak, the white blonde girl’s eyes is glowing and when he tried to reach her hands, he look at his hands. It’s bloody and all dirty. The white blonde girls cries and leave him along with a white hairy beast with a tail that looks like a fish tail and a 7 foot tall man with an angelic wings that came along with her.”What the hell is going on in here ? I can’t move my body and why is everything around me is so dark ? All I can see is a total black sky with a fire-ish clouds !” Jason saw his hand holding a red diamond and the red diamond shines so bright. Jason wakes up and he heard his mom knocking on the bathroom’s door with a worried voice “Jason ! are you okay !? It’s almost an hour since Im shouting at you, please answer me !” Jason is still inside the bathtub with a curious voice he says “Im okay mom, I just fell asleep in the bathtub and I have… the strangest dreams ever in my life !”

Jason put his clothes on and when he opens the bathroom’s door, his mom is already standing there with a worried face and she ask him to have a breakfeast with her ”Great, now I have to re-heat the breakfeast meal again because of you” says mom. Jason sit on a living room’s couch and he’s still confused with his dream that he dreamed while he fell asleep in the bathtub “Why was my dream that I dreamed last time looks so real ? and what’s with the white blonde girl and her creature looking friends ? Is this some kind of revelation” while serving her sons breakfeast, she says “No… your dream means you’re too much watching TV, young man” a few moments after he finished his breakfeast, he took a walk around outside…memorizing the past, thinking about his next life after he graduates from high school “Man, I can’t believe Im going to college ! It’s like yesterday I was still playing game with all my friends and now Im going to college !?” he felt very happy, and keep memorizing his past until suddenly he hits a girl in front of him.

“Im so sorry !!! you can blame me it’s all my fault, I walk with my head looking at… whoooa...wa…wait a minute” Jason surprise for what he sees right now in front of him “Dear lord ! that’s the girl that I saw on my last dream”. He sees a 5.6 foot tall white skinned woman, with a blonde hair, huge chest, and a small waist. The white blonde woman responds for what he says with her ghetto accent “what wait !? Im cool, homeboy…just be careful next time” and then the white blonde woman introduce herself “Oh, before I go lemme introuduce maself, ma name is Miranda Exan, or you can just call me Miranda” Jason replies back “Im…Jason…Jason Pervseus” Miranda’s expression look shocked after she heard what Jason says

“Whoooa…whooaaa…whoooa Hold on homeboy. Hold on ! Did I just heard yer last name was…Pervseus !?”

Jason is getting curious for what Miranda’s questioning about his last name, he thought that there will be a connection between his last name and his last dream, and he says “Yes…my last name was Pervseus, My mom said that I get the name Pervseus because my Grandfather’s last name were also Pervseus, but sadly he pass before I was born, and even sadly some of my classmate makes fun of my last name. Anyway why are you so curious with my last name ??” Miranda with her funny ghetto accent says “Awww…No, nothing, Just some of ma ol’d fwens last name were also Pervseus too, I thought you have a…some kinda family relations with him…no ! I mean her, ehehehe” Jason says “Oh…kay, Im sorry about that. By the way I have to leave now, I have to prepare myself for tonight’s party, see you around Miranda” Jason leave Miranda with a curious face while scratching his heads, then Miranda shouting at Jason “Al’right Jason ma boy, see ya at the high school graduation party !” Jason surprises for what she said “How does she know !? I never said anything about my high school graduation party !?” and then Jason turn his back on and running through Miranda and he says “how do you know that tonight is my high school graduation party !?” Miranda says “Whuaattt !? Im just guessing y know ! aww don’t be soo serious boy ! It’s not like Imma physycic or somethin” Mirandas smiling at Jason. “Yeah you’re right, it’s just…today I have so many strange things going on around me, like a strange dream where I looked so weak and dying, trying to reach a white blonde girl’s hand that look just like you and she was accompanied by a 7 foot tall man who had a bird wings, and a white hairy creature that looked like a rabbit, and it has a tail that looked like a fish tail and then I met a girl that looked like in my dreams…whose it’s you, Im sorry Miranda maybe Im taking this too serious, it’s just a dream anyway” After Jason explain for what happen today, Miranda’s face expression looks speechless and she says “mmm…hmmm I think you’re too much watchin Television, okay then…’till next time homeboy” then she left the place and Jason is still in the same place sitting on a chair near him. Slowly, Jason starts to realize that it was just a mere dream “meh…it’s only a dream anyway and besides, I never had a dream that suddenly happens in real life ever…” Jason try to comfort himself and calm down. He returns back to his house.

Back at home, Jason lays on his bed watches his favourite cartoon show, and after a few minutes he heard the sound of a bus engine stopping, sign for his younger brother, Mario returning back home. Mario going upstairs and put his green colored backpack in his bedroom, he takes a sheet of paper inside his backpack and he goes to Jason’s room. Meanwhile Jason still watching his favourite cartoon show until suddenly a head with shagy hair block his view. “HEY !” Mario shouting at Jason “What ? Im watching !” Mario gives the paper that he brought from his backpack to Jason “I owe you one dude, look at my math midterm quiz! it’s an A+ ! A GODDAMN A+ !” Jason were also surprised for what his brother achieved in his midterm quiz “Wow…you got an A+ in your first midterm quiz on your freshman year of Junior High !” Mario thank to his older brother Jason for staying up all night helped him solve the hardest math questions yesterday. “Hey Jason, since you’re going out of town in the next 3 months, can I keep your action figures ?” Mario asks Jason while he’s playing with Jason’s action figure “well sure, just don’t break it…” Jasons answers Mario while he took a book from his drawer near his bed “will that include the playstation as well !?” says Mario. Jason watching at his brother’s expression telling that he really wants to keep it so bad, Jason says “sigh…alright, but promise me not to fail in your math class” After Jason said it Mario scream and jumping on a floor like he just won a Million dollar bill “Wooo…hooo !!!, thank you-thank you so much Jay !!!” Mario leaves Jason’s room with full of happiness. After Mario left, Jason continue to watch his favourite cartoon show, and after a few moments later his eyes is getting heavier and heavier, He’s starting to close his eyes slowly, then Jason fell asleep while the TV is still on.

 

 

Meanwhile Miranda sitting on a chair in the park, talk to someone from her cellphone, she says “It looks like I’ve found the Pervseus Grandson”